Score: 10

"Longtime fan"

submission: Jerry: The End

date: November 13, 2009

I'm a longtime fan, and I hope you get into television writing, the best line was about douchebags and smoking.

Score: 9

"Nice."

submission: Meet the Spy

date: August 3, 2009

You did an excellent job matching the style of Team Fortress shorts. Also, you did extremely well for making the camera angles work considering this is only a flash cartoon. The panning, field of focus, and insert shots were all done very well. My only complaint is that I think the audio can sound much richer and fuller.

Score: 5

"OH my word, songstowearpants?"

submission: I am Trent Reznor

date: August 2, 2009

I am a huge fan of songtowearpants, and I imagine if this flash passes, he'll be proud. Considering his style, this is spot on. I think if you spend just a little more time on this, the animation will be a lot smoother. Good luck!

Score: 10

"Wow."

submission: Jackie

date: August 1, 2009

I laughed. I was shocked. I was a little sad in side that yet again... Jerry's gone away. This stuff is amazing. Perfection of the flash art, really.

Score: 10

"Good Lord..."

submission: Junior

date: August 1, 2009

I hope that one day Cartoon Network picks you up, because you're absolutely a genius. You're stories pick up everything, perfect timing and pacing, and you never forget a single thing from past projects. This one is awesome, as usual. I was hoping the closet part would come back into play, and I hope to see more of that dimension. And I'm totally going to see if I can find/buy that book.

Score: 8

"Haha..."

submission: Batman: Bright Day

date: August 1, 2009

I love all your work. The animation in this is spot on, as usual. And, that seriously sounds like Christian Bale. And oh good Lord, that smacking thing was obnoxious.

Score: 8

"Slice of life."

submission: S13 - I Want It! Syndrome

date: August 1, 2009

A nicely made packaged animation with consistency. The animation and shots were done with expertise and the story followed through from beginning to end. Sweet job.

Score: 6

"Okay."

submission: Bedtime Story

date: July 16, 2009

On this one, my only problem is the pacing. I think you could have sped up the movements and also used faster paced music. It drew on to the point that I was become disinterested.

Score: 10

"Wow."

submission: Hillside Settlement

date: July 16, 2009

Slick animation with a song to match. That was a great sequence without any words but yet, had just the right pacing to have emotion for that last part of the movement. Excellent work. You may want to continue tapping into this story world.

Score: 10

"Sweet Mother of Pearl"

submission: Jerry and The Closet

date: December 4, 2008

You're going to make it. 20 and making stuff like this? I'm entirely jealous. Anyway, scariest closet ever. And the dad sounds like Dane Cook.